So sorry for not updating, I have been really busy!
Now is a kind of sonnet I wrote, as in english classes at school we have been studying shakespeare's sonnets. It's not exactly a sonnet, as some of the syllables may not be exact, it's just based on sonnet guidelines.
Like snow in winter and flowers in spring,
I wonder if average is forgotten,
What if that spark I do not bring?
Does that make my life rotten?
I try to search for my very own gold,
But it appears I do not behold,
What can I do to be different?
Make a big scene just to be heard?
Does that involve me being persistent?
Or are others simply born preferred?
I try to be noticed, steal the show,
But I know however bright I shine,
No matter how much I try to glow,
The glorious sky will never be mine.
I do like that poem, the only part that I would change is the forgotten and rotten, as I think rotten isn't a good description to use, but I couldn't think of anything else, and I thought it sounds OK. If you have any idea's on what I could use, please comment!
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2 comments:
Hi Georgia, can't think of wording for you but no worries, you are a bright spark that shines bright!! Always enjoy catching up on your blog...Louise
Ha, thank you!
And i'm trying to think of a different adjective, and when i do i will edit it :)
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